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Offline Dustbunny-studios

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Desolate Ceremony
« on: September 27, 2010, 11:13:50 AM »
Beware Beloved one, who soon shall die,
Without the sight of demon’s flight,
When stars above will dance all through the night,
And Moon will see the sight and break her bond,
Far down below the two who sleep will soon awake,
Beneath the bones of earth shall one break free,
The other comes from endless sea,
The foundation of time they will tear and shake,
Dear Moon will hide, and Sun will wear his shroud,
So starts an endless night when sleepers forsake their first state,
And those who sleep remake both earth and cloud,
Until the lone demon with hissing hair and eyes of hate,
Unmake the bonds and fight the light,
To keep the age of endless night.


Desolate Ceremony is about a young demon girl, the joke of the Dark Realm. Sick of her failings, the Demon Counsel decide to give her one last chance…
A story of hidden secrets, impossible friendships and a girl who doesn’t know what a moon is. There’s also going to be an apocalypse, but that’s not important right now.

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So yeah DC has been in production stages for quite sometime now and I finally had the non-existant balls to start it and put it up on the internet :D
I can be found on my DA: www.dustbunny-studios.deviantart.com
On Comicfury: http://desolateceremony.thecomicseries.com/
And also on Drunk Duck: http://www.drunkduck.com/DesolateCeremony/index.php

Feedback on it is always welcome!

Offline otomo

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Re: Desolate Ceremony
« Reply #1 on: September 27, 2010, 12:20:53 PM »
It looks great, put it up!   

I'd say for the word balloons you probably want to use some skinnier connectors, and give a little bit more room for the text to breathe, but I think the artwork looks great. 

Offline Rob

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Re: Desolate Ceremony
« Reply #2 on: September 29, 2010, 12:07:26 AM »
Off to a good start. Congrats.

Offline Dustbunny-studios

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Re: Desolate Ceremony
« Reply #3 on: September 29, 2010, 06:07:57 PM »
Thanks so much :D this is my first longterm comic so I really happy that people are liking it :D I just hope I can keep it up :D

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Re: Desolate Ceremony
« Reply #4 on: September 30, 2010, 11:10:33 PM »
Still very new, but it seems promising.